Sunday, 29 March 2020

IELTS essay, topic: Some people think that it is fine for professional athletes to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well (opinion)

Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well.

Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Sample Essay

Although most professional athletes are aware of their position as role models for their fans and behave accordingly, there are sportsmen and sportswomen who behave poorly during matches and in their private life. While some people find it acceptable as long as their performance on the field is not impacted, not everyone agrees with that point of view.

Those who put athletes’ performance on the field above everything else point out that competitive environment and immense pressure the sports people are under affect their behavior. They argue that athletes are entitled to privacy and their actions before and after games should not concern the general public. I find this hard to agree with, because poor behavior in sports people is incompatible with their role in public’s life and also for the reason that their actions could negatively affect their entire sports industry.

The main reason why I believe athletes should behave well at all times is that their behavior is tremendously influential. Spectators respect players and many copy their actions and behavior; therefore, if top players misbehave or violate laws, some of the fans may feel compelled to follow their example and behave badly. For example, after an acclaimed baseball player was caught using drugs some years ago, the number of people who were arrested for the same crime significantly increased. This shows quite clearly why high profile players should consider their actions very carefully in order to promote a peaceful society.

In addition, the behavior of athletes might affect the popularity of their sports. Some companies sponsor successful athletes who boost their brand recognition and sales of their products. Players and sports industry executives are financially compensated for endorsing products and participating in commercial advertisements. If they demonstrate poor behavior, sponsors could direct their money elsewhere, and as a result sports matches could suffer due to lack of funds. To illustrate, Sumo, a traditional Japanese sport, is held every season thanks to resources donated by companies. In a year when a Sumo player was involved in a violent crime, no matches were held, resulting in a large deficit of funds.

In conclusion, I completely disagree with the opinion that top athletes are permitted to behave badly because their behavior may negatively influence the public behavior and sports industry itself.

Assessor’s comment: This response addresses both sides of the argument by exploring the reasons why some people think athletes are allowed to behave poorly as long as they play well, and the reasons why others think poor behavior has no excuse. This response deserves a high score for task achievement because of that. A good range of cohesive devices is used in this essay; that and the organisation of ideas makes it easy to follow. Sentence structures are varied and the vocabulary is quite rich, the author also showed good control of grammar and spelling. It is worth noting that this sample is longer than the recommended 260 – 285 words, however, this isn’t an issue provided the author can complete an essay of this length and quality in under 40 minutes. Overall this is a good example of a Band 8 essay.

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Friday, 27 March 2020

How to focus on IELTS when your mind is somewhere else

It’s an unsettling time and even the happiest and most positive people among us can’t help but feel down occasionally – especially after reading the news.

Those of you who spent some time on IELTS-Blog.com know that I often recommend reading the news online or reading newspaper articles to improve your English.

I’m afraid I have to change that advice now. In fact, I take it back!

1. Stop constantly reading the news.

Now your top priority is to keep calm and stay positive. To do that you need to limit your exposure to the news. I believe you already have the words “Coronavirus” and “COVID-19” in your vocabulary, and at the moment there isn’t much content out there about other things. Most people who panic do so because they see and hear others panic – stay away from that mood, stay withdrawn, unplug your mind from the news. You can’t control the virus, but you CAN control how you feel and react to the situation. Your mental health is just as important as your physical health. I’m sure you are already protecting your physical health – so it’s time that you start taking better care of your mental health.

So, from today, promise yourself to read the news no more than once a day – allow your thoughts to spend time away from the hysteria, to recover. That includes news in your first language, too!

2. Instead of consuming, create.

Reading the news is so easy, because it’s on your phone, it’s on your laptop, it’s just so accessible. When you read the news, you passively consume content that upsets you. We need to change that, to make you active and doing things that are GOOD for you. So, whatever device you are using, put IELTS materials there, and make it your ‘go-to activity’ on that device.

  • Instead of reading the news, read an IELTS Reading passage and answer its questions.
  • Instead of Googling stories about Coronavirus online, research ideas for an IELTS essay and then write that essay.
  • Instead of watching a news video online, do a Listening test – that’s at least half an hour spent not thinking about the virus.

Now THAT is what I call advancing your IELTS preparation and wellbeing at the same time!

IELTS content is great for taking your mind off everyday life, because its range of topics is very wide. You get to learn interesting facts from the world of physics, chemistry, psychology, marketing, law and more that you wouldn’t discover otherwise.

3. Take a break from reality.

Some people escape stress by reading a book, others like to watch a movie, whichever works for you – do it, just make sure the book or the movie is in English. Reading a book in English will help you learn new sentence structures, linking words, vocabulary, spelling, increase your reading speed, all at the same time as transporting you into another reality. Watching a movie can improve your Listening skills, Pronunciation, Speaking in general, you can learn some new idioms and expressions, and of course it’s a really fun way to spend an hour!

4. Remember your goal.

To keep your sanity and motivation, keep your eyes on the prize – the reason WHY you are taking IELTS. Because even if you don’t feel this way now, as soon as the situation is contained in your country (and hopefully in the world too), that goal will become even more important to you. Look at Hong Kong, for example – the IELTS exams were suspended there at first, but resumed as soon as the virus was contained. Other countries will follow the same pattern, and you want to be ready.

Remember that you are strong, and you will overcome this hardship. Then start proving it to yourself by preparing to ace your IELTS test!

5. Visualise your success.

You probably heard this one before, that visualising things helps you achieve them. But what does it actually mean ‘to visualise’? Surprisingly, not many people know. It means imagining things in detail, in a POSITIVE way. If you want to take IELTS and pass, don’t imagine going to the test centre, sitting down to do the Listening test and missing half the answers. Don’t imagine yourself failing. Imagine how you calmly sit down, put your headphones on, concentrate and tune out all the distractions, and how one by one you hear the answers and write them down in their spaces. You are focused and confident, you know what you’re doing. This is visualising and it prepares you for success.

Stay healthy and spread positivity around you.



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Sunday, 22 March 2020

COVID-19 update: IELTS-Blog.com is here to support you, no matter what.

Hello everyone,

Simone here, and this is a quick update to let you know some great news (yes, I know that’s rare to hear these days!):

1. At IELTS-Blog.com we are operating as usual. Our global team works remotely from home, and COVID-19 did not affect our ability to support your exam preparation.

This means we continue to provide support for all our books and practice tests, the writing correction service is running as usual, the interactive speaking assessments are happening, online courses are working fine, and we are replying to any emails or comments we receive within 12 to 24 hours. We are taking good care of our health and wellbeing, so that we can continue helping you prepare for IELTS.

More good news: our online courses‘ duration has been doubled, so it’s 90 days for a Speed course, and 180 days for a Master course. We also doubled the money back guarantee period for our books and materials to 120 days.

2. Exam updates that we send out will still be arriving in your Inbox, if you are subscribed (and if you’re not, it’s free – so you should definitely take advantage of that and sign up).

We are asking our Gmail subscribers to check their Spam folder, and if our emails accidentally land there, mark them as Not Spam. We respect your inbox space, and never abuse your trust.

3. Essay samples, speaking videos and other helpful materials will be posted on our website as usual.

4. IELTS results competitions will still be held every month, because in the majority of countries people can still take IELTS exams normally. You can check this page to see whether IELTS exams were suspended in your country and the date when testing restarts.

5. Tips and advice from IELTS high scorers will still be posted on the blog as soon as possible.

I wish you all good health, keep studying, and stay positive!

Remember that we’re all in this together, and everyone at IELTS-Blog.com is 100% committed to helping you prepare for your exams.



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Friday, 13 March 2020

IELTS and COVID-19: global update, info and advice

Nearly everyone in the world is affected by Novel Coronavirus in some way, and we know that many IELTS test takers have questions related to this situation. At the time of writing this IELTS exams are being held normally in most countries, with minimal changes if any.

There are some precautions that IELTS test centres are taking, in particular they are asking people not to attend their test if they have been in contact with anyone suspected to be exposed to COVID-19 (Novel Coronavirus), or if they have cough, fever or shortness of breath. People who can’t attend their test because of COVID-19 concerns are asked to call their IELTS test centre to discuss their options of rescheduling for a later date or refunds.

As the majority of IELTS exams are going ahead, if you feel like protecting yourself by wearing a face mask to your exam, you can! The IELTS test centre staff may ask you to remove it for a short time while you are being identified / photographed, but other than that you’re allowed to wear a face mask the entire time of your exam.

In the countries where IELTS testing was temporarily put on hold for the next 2 weeks, the good news is that as soon as the testing is restarted, there will be more dates available and larger venues will be used, to accommodate more test takers. For example, in China the paper-based IELTS capacity will be doubled, and computer-delivered IELTS will be offered 3 times a day, 7 days a week.

All in all, the overall message from IELTS organisation seems to be – if your IELTS plans are affected by the Coronavirus, speak to your test centre and they will do their best to help you.

Is now the time to stop preparing for IELTS? Definitely NOT.

4 Reasons to ramp up your IELTS preparation in the face of Coronavirus:

1. If IELTS testing in your country is running normally, you should take your test while you can. We cannot control decisions made on government level, so let’s make the most of this period of normalcy.

2. If your workplace asked you to work from home, it means you save time commuting! Using that extra half an hour a day to write an essay, do a Listening or a Reading test or practice in answering Speaking questions will give you some noticeable progress. If the event you wanted to go to was cancelled, again – here’s some more time to work on your IELTS skills.

3. Even if testing is temporarily on hold in your country, that time is NOT lost if you use it to prepare for IELTS. Plus it gives you something to do and takes your mind off other things, helping you occupy yourself during the period you have to stay indoors. IELTS preparation is a very immersive activity that makes time fly!

4. Putting your IELTS preparation on hold because of Coronavirus uncertainty is a mistake, because when you stop, you don’t just stop – you actually go backwards as time passes, your level drops and it becomes harder to get it back. Scientists all over the world are working to get COVID-19 under control soon, and when that happens, you want to be READY, not behind!

Take good care of yourself and your family, and think positive thoughts.



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Wednesday, 11 March 2020

IELTS Results competition winners in February 2020

Prepare to be inspired, as we introduce to you the winners of IELTS Results competition in February 2020. Eight people from four countries (Australia, India, Iran and Zimbabwe) achieved the highest IELTS scores in the competition, ranging from Band 7.5 to 8.5. There were also some 9’s in the individual sub-tests!

On behalf of the entire IELTS-Blog.com community, we would like to congratulate the following winners:

Academic Module – 1st placeBand 9 in IELTS

  • Heeru Ahuja from India, Band 8.5

Academic Module – 2nd place

  • Navid Farazmandnia from Iran, Band 8
  • Prajina Urva from India, Band 8

Academic Module – 3rd place

  • Convictions S Samunyaka from Zimbabwe, Band 7.5
  • Tahera Sultana from Australia, Band 7.5

General Training Module – 1st place

  • Ishita Dhada from India, Band 8
  • Murali Bomma from India, Band 8
  • Jhansi Kona from India, Band 8

Congratulations on doing so well in your exams! As a token of our appreciation we are sending your certificates of achievement to your emails. Winning IELTS results will be displayed in the IELTS-Blog hall of fame – so if you won, please feel free to show them off to your friends!

How did they score so well?

We’re very happy to report that two of the winners (Heeru Ahuja, Band 8.5 and Ishita Dhada, Band 8) used our IELTS practice tests to prepare for the exam. Dr. Dhada found the practice tests instrumental in her study, and said

“I am happy to share that this time I have received the required score. I have got an overall 8.0 band score ( L-9, R-8, W-7, S-7 ).

I am really grateful to you for all your help. The papers that you have designed always kept me a step ahead to face IELTS with more confidence. Moreover, I must say that IELTS-Blog.com has also played a profound role in terms of providing me with the latest writing and speaking questions to go through.”

Tahera Sultana (Band 7.5) used our writing correction service while preparing for her exam, and Jhansi Kona (Band 8) signed up for our free daily emails with latest IELTS questions, tips, materials and advice.

As for the rest of the winners, we’d love to find out what IELTS books they used, how they prepared and studied, and what helped them achieve success in IELTS. Anything they wish to share will be posted on IELTS-Blog without delay, so everyone can use the same technique and get a better score in their own exam this month.

P.S. IELTS results competition runs every month, and everyone is welcome to participate. Learn how to enroll here.



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Friday, 6 March 2020

IELTS was nothing like Omar imagined – but he got Band 8.5 (here is how)

Omar considers English to be his first language, and even though he originally is from Jamaica, he’s been living in the US for quite a while. As someone who uses English daily and has experience with public Speaking (!), Omar didn’t think IELTS would be hard to pass, but the more he researched it, the more comments he read online, the more worried he grew. His IELTS story has a lot for you to learn from, and a happy ending – so have a read, make some notes, and use them to your own advantage!

Best IELTS test result January 2020 Band 8.5 in IELTS

Omar said:

“This was my first time taking the exam. I registered for the January 11th exam on December 6th. My band goal was 9 overall. I thought I could just walk in and take the exam without any major time investment because I viewed it as another typical standardized exam.

It wasn’t until December 18th while researching the format of the exam, that I saw where people were complaining about its difficulty and numerous repeated low band scores (even for native English speakers). This made me panic a bit; therefore, I went on a deep discovery of how that could be.

I quickly learned that the exam was nothing like I “imagined”. With that being said, I ordered 3 books to help me, asked specific questions that I was uncertain of regarding the exam designs, and psyched myself that I will find out what could cause the phenomenon of low band scores.

As of December 20th, I made it my duty to do at least 1 complete Listening and Reading practice test per day, with one rest day. I separated the sections of the tests (because I realized that they progressively went from easier to harder as you completed questions 1-40). I tracked the sections that I struggled with most and noticed that there were certain sections that I repeatedly struggled with (sections 2 and 3) as well as the T/F/NG or No/Yes/NG. I then understood I was good at the hardest and easiest questions (4th and 1st section, respectively).

What I did after learning from my mistakes and the trend of why I was struggling on those sections and questions, was that I decided to complete those parts first in the reading test and spend more time on them, than the other parts. This strategy can’t work with the listening, so I forced myself to listen more keenly in those areas for any traps and specific details.

For the Writing and Speaking tests, I barely did any practice. It wasn’t until near the end (after the Christmas holiday) that I decided that I should not neglect those areas because I think I’m good enough. With the speaking, I just learned what the components are and what they’re looking for and how to convey uninterrupted speech dialogue. Please note, I do have experience with public speaking. But I also learned that IELTS had a different style and I had to revamp what I was taught as a professional. I still never exercised any practical speaking in preparation. Advice: practice speaking English in EVERY SITUATION. No matter how casual or with non-speakers. It’s better to then translate.

For the writing, I read model essays that were considered/labeled as Band 8 and Band 9. Then I asked what’s different from theirs and mine. I started to write one task 2 essay each day for 5 days and sought feedback on 2 of them in Facebook and WhatsApp groups. The limited feedback were vague and did little to help me see necessary changes for improvement. One person even responded and said that one of my essay at most was band 5 and gave no reason why. I knew that wasn’t true because I had reviewed the IELTS Task 2 rubric and knew my basic writing was at least a band 7, but with some errors could be a band 6. What I realized was that with every essay, the writer had a certain style and that’s something you cannot replicate. I stuck to my writing style and just learned what were some recommended things to pay attention to. Advice: Know and understand the components of the rubric and the descriptors.

On the day of the exam:

I wrote in ALL CAPS on the answer sheet for listening and reading.

I completed the second and third section of the reading first. I still made mistake of writing words instead of letters for a few of the answers (why I got an 8), even though I read the instructions clearly. Advice: It’s best to write your answer on the reading answer sheet immediately in the essence of time. This will help you remember if you need to write words or answer choices (A, 1, i etc.) as answers for each section. You may be able to come back and make corrections. Otherwise, if you did like me and make a mistake when transferring the answers from booklet to answer sheet you may mess up following the SPECIFIC instructions for answer format. A costly mistake.

For the writing, I did task 2 first and truthfully went in with a plan of how to approach each type of essay question. I quickly looked at the type of question. It was a “to what extent do you agree or disagree with this…”

I jotted down a plan:

1st paragraph – General intro sentence. Rephrased the prompt. Thesis statement with my answer.
2nd paragraph – 1st point to support stance. Explain it. Give example or illustration.
3rd paragraphed – 2nd point to support stance. Explain it. Give example or illustration.
4th paragraph – conclusion to tie in the two points and say how they strongly support the thesis statement without repeating verbatim what was already said.

Truth be told, I spent so much time deciding on two clear and separate points, that by the time I decided to start writing, time was already slipping away. Therefore, I just started writing and almost threw the whole plan out the window. What came to my mind as I write, is what I wrote.

I did pay attention to make sure I had great transitions, using connectors, mix of simple, complex, and compound sentences, and paid attention to my punctuation. I did not pay much attention to vocabulary or grammar while writing. It was in the editing/reviewing phase that I did that. I made sure not to repeat words and used appropriate synonyms to replace most. However, I did not try to remember those “advanced IELTS words” that were suggested. I wanted to keep my individual (personal) voice and writing style to make sure the points were easy to follow, thoughts flowed, and that they were concise.

I did task 1 next and I literally just wrote as if I was writing/speaking to a friend. I did not use any plan or fancy vocabulary. I just made sure I covered what they asked for in the task: “Invite a friend to a concert, tell them why they would like it, when and where will it be, and how do I think it will be.”

With time against me, I quickly reread it and only made punctuation edits.

The speaking test felt like the easiest. The examiner’s disposition was so sweet and positive. It made for a pleasant conversation. I watched her body language as cue to when I’ve said enough and when I should keep talking. I just spoke naturally, avoided long pauses, and stayed positive. It was so quick and I was surprised when it was over because I was genuinely enjoying the “talk”. That’s what it felt like. My advice here is do not overthink or get in your head to try and give “perfect” responses. There’s no one-size-fits-all here. Just be you and give it your best shot of holding a conversation. If I was to receive a 9, this is where I thought I deserved it most.

My advice

  • Know what level of English mastery is required of you to realistically obtain the band score you need.
  • Master the English language first before trying to master the art of tricks and tips. The exam is designed in so many ways to prove your proficiency level is that or lower than it really is. It is very hard to fool or trick it.
  • Don’t waste your money if you know you are not ready. Like any art, you need to be at a certain level to soar.
  • Review the rubric for writing tasks and make sure you are unbiased about your writing.
  • Do not try to copy someone else’s writing style. It will come off as disingenuous and robotic.
  • Practice, practice, practice and note your weaknesses and strengths. Then strategize how to improve by learning why you got what you got wrong; especially for the objective sections (Listening and Reading).

    Note: if you are constantly getting the same range of raw score for reading and listening during the practice test, that’s the best estimate of your band score. Try to improve your English more first.

Use the time that you may worry or search for tricks to practice instead. The only way to get better at anything is to take action. Example: simply thinking about losing weight or researching how to lose weight won’t result in you losing weight.

Don’t be confused by the plethora of experts with conflicting views for what is required by IELTS. Take some of those advice with caution, as you may end up confusing yourself with too many different styles and varied recommendations.

Have confidence. But do not be cocky or biased about your English language aptitude.

PS: Although I prepped in 3 weeks, please remember that your situation will be different from mine, because we are all different. For that reason, what works for me may not work for you and vice versa.

Best of luck in your endeavors and may your results truly reflect your investment.”



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